I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora. I am Zack from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked how you put the bird in as well. I learnt that you are a great animator Maybe next time you could make someone do something funny. Please visit my blog here
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora. I am Zack from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you put the bird in as well.
I learnt that you are a great animator
Maybe next time you could make someone do something funny.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Zack
Thanks for your comment. I'll think about including that next time.
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