I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Ayana, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
You have included a vast array of facts brilliantly here. Your profile page about Lorde is informative and well-organised. Well done.
I didn’t know Lorde has sold so many certified single units! Do you know which of her songs is her best-seller? Perhaps you could find out for me.
My favourite Lorde song is ‘Green Light’. It always makes me think of the book, ‘The Great Gatsby’. In the book the main character Nick stares at a green light off a dock across the ocean. What’s your favourite Lorde song?
Maybe you could add a colour to your background to make your hard work pop. This could entice in more readers.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Ayana, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have included a vast array of facts brilliantly here. Your profile page about Lorde is informative and well-organised. Well done.
I didn’t know Lorde has sold so many certified single units! Do you know which of her songs is her best-seller? Perhaps you could find out for me.
My favourite Lorde song is ‘Green Light’. It always makes me think of the book, ‘The Great Gatsby’. In the book the main character Nick stares at a green light off a dock across the ocean. What’s your favourite Lorde song?
Maybe you could add a colour to your background to make your hard work pop. This could entice in more readers.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon