A girl or boy is bullied in P.E class.
Before i could even leave i heard crying coming from the boys changing room. Knowing i couldn't go in the boys room i said to myself "Be quick, run in and out". I walk towards the door and quietly open with one hand. I see the sulking boy and walk to him. He tells me he had been bullied during a P.E session not long ago.
I think it was really good. It made me never want to stop reading it. I think you should write the rest of the story instead of just the hook because it would be an amazing story.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your opinion. Didn't have as much time to finish the rest but next time.
ReplyDeleteTena rawa atu koe